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5D's Mary sue 2 by Obeliskgirljohanny 5D's Mary sue 2 by Obeliskgirljohanny
augh, I have a cold, I'm just talking alka-seltzer to relieve the pain in my nose.

this one is a is much more of a copy sue but it's another incarnation of the infamous harry potter sue Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way, augh the way I hear ebony's name gives the chills. of course she'll stab you in the back drink your blood. you know some people have been spotting mary sues on devient art but you know that the authors would deny their character as a mary sue. but I followed the rules of creating oc's and not a single Criticizing Comment has not showed up on my comments,

but these 5D's mary sues are just examples of mary sue incarnation that would learn anime fans about the dangers of creating a oc' and being criticized for it.

here are some things you need to do if you ever spot a mary sue like this one:

*do a fraternity test on her and yusei to determine if she's not Yusei's so-called sister (we all know that yusei is a only child and grew up with jack and crow and kailn as an ophan)
*pair yusei with akiza to make her super jealous
*push her off the kaiba corp building
*beat her in a duel with a powerful synchro monster
*burn her alive
*if she's a vampire, drive a stake into her heart.
*bury her alive.

or better yet

*call the fan-fiction police (cause sometimes mary sues can be very aggressive)


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:iconjustatheory:
JustATheory Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
Hahaha xD Good job.
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:iconobeliskgirljohanny:
Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks :)
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Yoko-tan Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
lol, incest?! XDD
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:iconobeliskgirljohanny:
Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
tell me about it!
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Yoko-tan Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconamgplz:
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The-Psychid Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012   Writer
"Plus, I'm a total stoner!"
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:iconobeliskgirljohanny:
Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I have no idea of what means but i'll go with that
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:iconthe-psychid:
The-Psychid Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012   Writer
A stoner is someone who smokes a lot, I think.
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
really?
that can explain the cigarette she's holding. :D
oh by they way did i mention that smoking is bad for people, so I'm guessing this mary sue would might die of lung cancer or heart disease.
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The-Psychid Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012   Writer
If she's a Mary-Sue, then she can't die of lung/heart cancer! You really need to learn your Mary-Sue terms! =P
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh, right ^^;
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DrawingtotheDeath Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So what's the different between a Mary sue and a OC? (bare with me I'm just learning about Mary sues)
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
well if you don't know what a mary sue is here is the definition from wikipedia:

A Mary Sue (sometimes just Sue), in literary criticism and particularly in fanfiction, is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as a wish-fulfilment fantasy for the author or reader. It is generally accepted as a character whose positive aspects overwhelm their other traits until they become one-dimensional. While the label "Mary Sue" itself originates from a parody of this type of character, most characters labelled "Mary Sues" by readers are not intended by authors as such. Male Mary Sues are often dubbed "Gary Stu", "Larry Stu", "Marty Stu", or similar names.

meaning a mary sue has no flaws, outragously perfect and sometimes has a relationship with the canon characters.

an oc has to be related to the anime itself and of course has some type of flaw, personal background make's sure that it's created by the author. and yes has an relationship with the other oc's and sometimes the characters.


perhaps i've said too much ^^;
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DrawingtotheDeath Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh ok thanks cause I got confused because I have my OC Moonfire (she's wasn't made from a show or a game she's just a character I draw and made up) she has a lot of flaws and a back story, so she's not a Mary sue?
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
if she has flaws then no she's not a mary sue.
you oc is fine the way it is.
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DrawingtotheDeath Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok good :XD: cause when I first saw the the word Mary sue I saw it in your comic series (good series by the way) and just sat there for a while thinking "what the heck is a mary sue" :XD:
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
right,
at least you know what a mary sue is, thanks to wikipedia :D
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DrawingtotheDeath Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I kinda don't trust wikipedia cause anyone cause say false statements so I barely go on wikipedia :XD:
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Obeliskgirljohanny Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
but you might find wikapedia that useful
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